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帮忙改一篇初二英语作文Hello.IamTom.IthinkWeiHua’sweekendisverybusybutfun.Becausehedoeslotsofthingsandhadfunwithhisfriends.IalsohadabusydaylastSunday.Ateighto’clockinthemorning.Iwasgettingup.ThenIb
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帮忙改一篇初二英语作文

Hello.IamTom.IthinkWeiHua’sweekendisverybusybutfun.Becausehedoeslotsofthingsandhadfunwithhisfriends.IalsohadabusydaylastSunday.Ateighto’clockinthemorning.Iwasgettingup.ThenIbrushedmyteethandhadbreakfast.Afterthat,Irodemybiketotheparktodoexercisewithmyfriends.Firstofall,we

runfor15minutes.Andthenweplayedbasketballwithmyfriends,too.Iwent

backat12:00pmandIhadlunchathome.IwatchedTVintheafternoon.IbegantodomyHomeworkat7:00pm.Wenttobedat9:30.Itwasabusyandtiredday!

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  Hello.IamTom.IthinkWeiHua’sweekendwasverybusybutfunbecausehedidlotsofthingsandhadfunwithhisfriends.IalsohadabusydaylastSunday.Ateighto’clockinthemorning,Igotup.ThenIbrushedmyteethandhadbreakfast.Afterthat,Irodemybiketotheparktodoexerciseswithmyfriends.Next,we   ranfor15minutes.AndthenIplayedbasketballwithmyfriends.Iwent   homeat12:00pmandIhadlunchathome.IwatchedTVintheafternoon.IbegantodomyHomeworkat7:00pm.Iwenttobedat9:30.Itwasabusyandtiredday!   语法错误很少,语句也很不错,表达完整,清晰,应该是一篇佳作.   仅稍作改.   希望能帮到您.
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